Senin, 09 Februari 2009

ABOUT ME



           WELCOME IN MY BLOGGER

 
 Hello my friends. previolusly, I can to introduce my identity. The first, my name is WAFIYATUS SHOLIHAH, you call me Wafi. I am number 2. I born in Gresik at fall out 20rd june 1996. so, now I am 12 years old. I school in SMP N 1 Sidayu, in the bilingual class, that is in the 7 class. My address in Campurejo village – panceng subdistrict – Gresik Regency. My hobby is writing, reading and drawing, but the most like me is drawing. I desire wish to be Doctor that Success and Well known.
 
   I have Family, in my family have my mother, my father, my older sister that now be in Tangerang-Banten my younger sister, my younger brother, my grand father, my grand mother,. My father is shrimp trader, His name is H. LUQMANUL HAKIM YAHYA. His hobby is reading Holy Qur’an and play chess. My Mother is trader, Her name is HJ. NUR JANAH. Her hobby is cook. I am very-very like food if take my Mom, because this food is very-very nice. My older sister is a student in Nurul Falaq – Tangerang – banten, her name is IFFA SALWATUL AISYI, you call her is Salwa, she is very-very Beautiful and Sweet. My younger sister is a student. Her name is WARDATUL JANAH. you call her Warda. She is very-very Beautiful and Cute. She is in the 4 class, and she is 10 years old. Her hobby is single and dancing and she is desire to be teacher that fine and useful for state. My younger brother is a student in the 2 class. his name is MOHAMMAD THOLAAT WAFA. you call his Wafa. he is very-very Handsame. He is 8 years old. His hobby is playing foot ball and playing kite. He is desire to be doctor that success ang well known in every where.
 
   I have 2 house, in the Ujung Pangkah and in the Campurejo Village, but now I live in Campurejo village. My house in Campurejo is very Small and Simple. My house be found 2 door, they are in front of my house and in the back my house. I have 1 bath room and 2 bed room. In front of my house be found 1 door that inside be found glass that broad, and in front of my house be found Ceramics that Green Colour and wall that to give paint that yellow colour.
Enough to here and Thank’s
By : Wafiyatus Sholihah


11 komentar:

  1. Your write is good,but in paragraph 3 you write "2 house" actually "2 houses".And "2 door" is actually "2 doors",and "2 bed room" actually you must write "2 bedrooms".

    BalasHapus
  2. ASSALAMUALAIKUM WR.WB.
    Your writing is good and your blog wallpaper is very, very, very good.
    WASSALAM

    BalasHapus
  3. Assalaamualaikum Wr.Wb
    Your blog and your writing is very good, but in the second paraghraph you write your mother's hobby's cook actually you write "cooking" because there you write her hobby is, there is an auxilarry you must use verb ing..
    thanks...
    Wassalaamualaikum Wr.Wb

    BalasHapus
  4. Assalamualaikum.....
    Wafi,your write is good.But in paragraph 2,your write"handsame".Actually you write"handsome".
    Wassalam........

    BalasHapus
  5. ASSALAMUALAIKUM WR.WB

    Wafy,your write is very good,but in second paragraph you write "house"actually "Houses"
    WASSALAMUALAIKUM

    BalasHapus
  6. Assalamualaikum Wr,Wb

    Wafy, your write is good. but in paragraph 2 you write "my hobby is writing, reading, and drawing" actually you write "my hobby are writing, reading, and drawing"
    Thanks,,,

    Wassalamualaikum.........!

    BalasHapus
  7. assalamualaikum...........!
    wafy your first posting is long and good....!
    But,in first pharagraph you write " i can to introduce my identity" and you must write "i will introduce my identity to you" please change it.ok??????????????
    Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    wassalamualaikum.............................!

    BalasHapus
  8. Assalamualaikum............
    wafi, your blog is very good and your write is good too.I like it.Remember it!!!!!!!!!!?????????//////??????//?????????//.
    Wassalamualaikum................

    BalasHapus
  9. assalamualaikum wr.wb
    hi sister how are you ???!!!!!???
    mz congratulation for your blogger , mz i look at in your blogger is very-very diferent with many blogger , because in your blogger i read you like draw but why you not show yur draw n i give 1 massage for you if you show your draw i confident your blogger is so pervect ok?????!!!!
    don't forget n thanks for your attentions and
    wassalamu'alaikum wr.wb
    your's : special sending )-.-(

    BalasHapus
  10. assalamualaikum...
    in your posting I found a mistake at"I have 1 bath room and 2 bed room.usually you must write" Ihave 1 bathroom and 2 bedrooms"
    thank`s
    wassalamualaikum....

    BalasHapus
  11. Assalamu'alaikum
    Your blog is good, but in paragraph 1 your write "My hobby is writing,.reading and drawing" actually " My hobby are writing,reading and writing " OK....!!!!!!
    Wassalamu'alaikum

    BalasHapus